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Monthly Archives: March 2009

On Sentence Rhythm

Consider the following sentence that I’m considering:
Human beings desire the dramatic.
Then consider
Human beings desire drama.
In the interest of brevity and conciseness, which is something I demand from my students, the latter wins by a nose. However, in the interest in rhythm, the former is the obvious choice. John Gardner discusses this in The Art of [...]

On Writing the Perfect Paragraph

What is it that makes the human being desire the dramatic, that last time to wave goodbye and off into the night? the sunset? Metaphorically, he rode off into the sunrise that morning. Literally, the sun must have come up over his left shoulder, window down, the heat baking the top of his forearm, his [...]

Hurt by Those You Love

There’s nothing like healthy doses of hate mail, from people you care about, to get the blood flowing. Yeah, the whining I’m doing about life with my father is somewhat pathetic, but in the purest sense of the word. There is a pathos here, and I am allowed to contemplate it, especially during this time [...]

Sign of the Apocalypse

This is in today’s Berkshire Eagle, Berkshire County, Massachusetts’ contribution to fine journalism:
According to a report by Pittsfield Police Officer Kipp D. Steinman: “Jennifer said that Stephanie had a ‘turkey baster and her brother’s semen in a sealed container.’
If this isn’t a sign that I need to leave this city, I’m not sure what is.